亲爱的烤鸭:

跟法老写雅思又跟大家见面了。暑假的课程已经接近尾声,法老也终于有时间去健身了。在偷了大半年的懒,眼睁睁的看着自己的体重飙升以后,我也终于决定痛定思痛,重新开始自己的减肥之旅,目前已经进行了一周有余。大家也一定要努力打造一副健康的身体,这样才能在雅思考试中过五关斩六将,赢得最终的胜利!

最近是雅思考试的高峰期,所以法老会持续地给大家带来考题的分析,希望大家有所收获。今天给大家带来712日的雅思写作task 1题目分析。712日小作文考察的是线图。这种类型在今年都是大热,所以请大家多多练习此类题目。

好了,让我们来看看题目吧。

Task 1:

The table andline graph give information of the Internet searches between 2001 and 2010. (图片取自新东方雅思数据库)

Year

Total searches

2001

1.4 billion searches

2010

2.5 billion searches

从表格中我们得到的信息是2010年的搜索量比起2001年来说大幅增加了。而线图告诉我们,尽管总数上升,但是谷歌和雅虎仍然是搜索引擎当中的龙头老大。而描写的顺序应该是从大到小描写。范文如下:

The graphs shows the changes in the amount and market shares of five different search engines from 2001 to 2010.

The total number of searches experienced a double increase, rising from 1.4 billion in 2001 to 2.5 billion searches in2010.

As shown in the line chart, shares of Google and Yahoo first had a similar rising trend, which grew from around 50% to almost 60% in 2005. Then Google’s share continued to boost and ended at approximately 70% by the end of the period, while Yahoo failed to keep up with Google, whose proportion declined to slightly over 40%. Although Microsoft remained stable in the first eight years, they also had a bigger market share (35%)in 2010 compared with 2001(30%).

AOL and Ask Jeeves made up the smallest portion over these years, although their shares saw a rise in the first five years, they dropped back to its original level at roughly 10% in 2010.

Overall, despite the fact that the total amount of searches grew substantially and that Yahoo’s share fell significantly,other search engines failed to overtake Google and Yahoo’s positions as the most popular Internet searching platforms.

注意描写细节的时候不要过分纠结于细小的变化,写出趋势,重点描写首尾的细节就好。

好了,今天就讲到这里,下次我再给大家带来同一天的大作文,敬请期待。

只有勤练基本功才可以保证作文写得漂亮。拒绝模板,踏踏实实地和法老做积累,你可以做到的!

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